I am hoping to find out that all farmers go back to using the same methods as before. Although these chemicals being used make it so that the crops and animals grow faster, is it really worth risking the lives of innocent people that are simply just enjoying a meal. Going back to the old methods does not mean that it will eliminate all the of the chances of people dying because of their food, but it will definitely lower it by a huge margin. Anyways, I know exactly what i want to talk about but I am having trouble organizing everything and making sure that i get my ideas out there. I as told that my rough draft had some really good points, but it needed to be more organized because I was all over the place. I want to be able to know what order I should write about things in. I mention a good idea, but I don't elaborate on it which is causing me to be a hot mess. My draft was really disorganized and it wasn't that the paragraphs were sorted funky, it was that none of the paragraph talked about a specific thing. It was more like random statements put in to paragraph. I want to have a flow to my research paper and not have random statements in the middle of a paragraph where it does't fit.
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Monday, March 20, 2017
How should I organize my essay?
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