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Friday, March 17, 2017

Foodborne Illnesses and the FDA's Role

My final topic that I ended up choosing was foodborne illnesses and how the FDA plays a role. I have a solid five pages done with thick paragraphs that are usable for my final draft. I got most of my draft done over the previous weekend, knowing that I had a math test the same day the draft was due. So with time management, I productively found myself on my laptop, researching the afternoon away.
A big part that I have to work on is setting a thesis statement, as well as organizing my paragraphs to support my overall thesis. I just need to take the weekend to organize my paper and start perfecting it for my final.
I also have to incorporate the citations for the handful of articles that I used, with also finding a balance between using too many articles, or not using enough. With that being said, my works cited page is ready to go! I am aware that citations are my weaknesses, and that I really need to take the time to make sure they’re integrated correctly.
Although, I find myself still not having a set question, and I need to use those stasis questions to really squeeze out a question. If anyone can help me propose my question, I was thinking about asking “How does the FDA play a role in foodborne illnesses?” but I am not confident that there is a correct answer to my question or if it sounds a bit odd or funky. If anyone can help me or give me reassurance to use this question, that would be great!

2 comments:

  1. Like you, I still don't have a set question. I tried to take Mrs. Fletcher's advice on just writing our paper and the question should write itself. The question that you have written above sounds great, but I think I'd need to read your paper to make sure. If you want me to read your paper sometime this week I'd be more than happy too!

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  2. It depends on if you are researching how the FDA can prevent it and what the FDA can do in response to it. If it is both, I think the question could be "How can the FDA regulate foodborne illnesses?", if that sounds better.

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